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Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include What the gift is Why you chose it How it will be delivered

Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include What the gift is Why you chose it How it will be delivered p5nqa
Dear matt, It has been long time since I talked to you. I am writing this letter to congratulate on your new home, you have been busy with the move lately. I hope we meet some time in the near future. For your new home I am gifting you the food processor which you were planning to buy for quite some time. Its a great addition to your place. You have a immense interest in home made cooking and healthy eating. That's why choose it, you will have a lot of opportunity in prepping your delicious sauces, smoothies as well as making dressings. really looking forward to try your cooked food sometime. Your gift will be delivered by the Amazon next week, I hope by that time you will settle down. please let me know if you have any issue with the product we can request for an exchange. Really waiting for your review of the processor. congratulations once again for a important achievement. With Warm Wishes sid
Dear
matt
, It has been long
time
since I talked to you. I am writing this letter to congratulate on your new home, you have been busy with the
move
lately. I hope we
meet
some
time
in the near future.

For your new home I am gifting you the food processor which you were planning to
buy
for quite
some
time
.
Its
a great addition to your place.

You have
a
immense interest in home made cooking and healthy eating. That's why choose it, you will have
a lot of
opportunity in prepping your delicious sauces, smoothies
as well
as making dressings.
really
looking forward
to try
your cooked food sometime.

Your gift will
be delivered
by the Amazon
next
week, I hope by that
time
you will settle down.
please
let
me know if you have any issue with the product we can request for an exchange.
Really
waiting for your review of the processor.
congratulations
once again for
a
important
achievement.

With Warm Wishes
sid
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include What the gift is Why you chose it How it will be delivered

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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