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Write a letter to the editor to give you your opinion about a magazine you putd

Write a letter to the editor to give you your opinion about a magazine you putd KndKL

Dear editor I have purchased, few days ago, your magazine via your website. I received the magazine yesterday and I finished reading it this morning. I m writing you this letter to give you some feedback. I am a football fan and I really enjoy reading football news. I have been following football game for a long time. It is my favorite sport. That's why i always pay attention to detail while reading football news. When I decided to purchase I was expecting to have more information about players profile. It is important for me to know more about the players of Arsenal. Since your magazine, according to what iis mentioned as a slogan, is for Arsenal City football news, you should focus on describing players of the city's teamThis is the point that you should improve according to my point of view. If you don't have enough staff, i can recommend you to hire a new journalist who will be dedicated only to this stuff. I hope you will take a closely look at this demand. Sylvester

Dear editor I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
, few days ago, your magazine via your website. I received the magazine yesterday and I finished reading it this morning. It seems that an apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
I m
 writing you this letter to give you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 feedback.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
 fan and I really
 enjoy reading You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withannouncementstoryworddisclosureadviceaccount
news
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have been following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
 game for a long time. It is my favorite sport. That's why Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 always pay attention to detail while reading You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withannouncementstoryworddisclosureadviceaccount
news
. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 I was expecting to have more information about players profile. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for me to know more about the players of Arsenal. Since your magazine, according to what Possible spelling mistake found.IISishisitsIITINS
iis
 mentioned as a slogan, is for Arsenal City You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoccer
football
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withannouncementstoryworddisclosureadviceaccount
news
, you should focus on describing players of the city's Possible spelling mistake found.teamsdeathsteachesMemphissteamshipsteamships
teamThis
 is the point that you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 according to my point of view. If you don't have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 staff, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can recommend you to hire a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 journalist who will be dedicated
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 to this stuff. I hope you will take a You used an adverb ('closely') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('look') instead of another adjective.
closely look
 at this demand. Sylvester