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Dear editor I have purchased, few days ago, your magazine via your website. I received the magazine yesterday and I finished reading it this morning. I m writing you this letter to give you some feedback. I am a football fan and I really enjoy reading football news. I have been following football game for a long time. It is my favorite sport. That's why i always pay attention to detail while reading football news. When I decided to purchase I was expecting to have more information about players profile. It is important for me to know more about the players of Arsenal. Since your magazine, according to what iis mentioned as a slogan, is for Arsenal City football news, you should focus on describing players of the city's teamThis is the point that you should improve according to my point of view. If you don't have enough staff, i can recommend you to hire a new journalist who will be dedicated only to this stuff. I hope you will take a closely look at this demand. Sylvester
Dear editor I have
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purchased
, few days ago, your magazine via your website. I received the magazine yesterday and I finished reading it this morning.
It seems that an apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "I'm"?
I m
writing you this letter to give you
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some
feedback.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am a
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football
fan and I
really
enjoy reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
football
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have been following
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
football
game for a long time. It is my favorite sport. That's why
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
always pay attention to detail while reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
football
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
I decided to
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purchase
I was expecting to have more information about players profile. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for me to know more about the players of Arsenal. Since your magazine, according to what
Possible spelling mistake found.
iis
mentioned as a slogan, is for Arsenal City
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
football
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
, you should focus on describing players of the city's
Possible spelling mistake found.
teamThis
is the point that you should
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improve
according to my point of view. If you don't have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
staff,
Did you mean "I"?
i
can recommend you to hire a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
journalist who will
be dedicated
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only
to this stuff. I hope you will take a
You used an adverb ('closely') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('look') instead of another adjective.
closely look
at this demand. Sylvester

IELTS letter Write a letter to the editor to give you your opinion about a magazine you putd

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
177 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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