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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear John, I am writing this letter to apologize for the inconvenience caused because of the Friday night party at my house. I understand that the music was quite loud and also the party went on till 4 in the morning. Actually, I threw this party to celebrate my son's latest accomplishment, as he graduated with flying colours and had also won a medal at the state race. Since it was a big moment in the family, all the relatives had gathered to congratulate him. Even we did not realize that the party would go on for so long. I can understand the trouble I caused you and totally accept my mistake and will make sure that this won't happen again in the future. I hope you understand and forgive me now because we are not only neighbours but friends too. I look forward to our golf and beer sessions. Yours Sincerely Anuj
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to apologize for the inconvenience caused
because
of the Friday night
party
at my
house
. I understand that the music was quite loud and
also
the
party
went on till 4 in the morning. Actually, I threw this
party
to celebrate my son's latest accomplishment, as he graduated with flying
colours
and had
also
won a medal at the state race. Since it was a
big
moment in the family, all the relatives had gathered to congratulate him. Even we did not realize that the
party
would go on for
so
long. I can understand the trouble I caused you and
totally
accept my mistake and will
make
sure that this won't happen again in the future. I hope you understand and forgive me
now
because
we are not
only
neighbours
but
friends too.
I
look forward to our golf and beer sessions.

Yours
Sincerely


Anuj
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
152 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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