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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.

. Dear, Sir/Madam: I am Cherry Lhev Mercado. recently i moved to this neighborhood, I found this place quiet and cozy and the neighbor have a welcoming nature, and my friend that lives here encourage me to moved here because most of the facility are pretty amazing that i can enjoy. i'm writting this letter to invite you to my upcoming party, to get to know each other better as a neighbor. but i'm worried about it might have a incovienient on your behalf because of the noise from the party. therefore i'm also looking forward for your agreement about the party. Please accept this fruit basket as a token of my gratitude to be part of this subdivison, i'm hoping that someday we can know each other and bond to have a better neigborhood without circumstances. i very much hope that to hear from you shortly. Yours sincerely. Cherry Lhev Mercado

Don't put a space before the full stop.
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 Dear, Sir/Madam:

I am Cherry Possible spelling mistake found.HEVLHV
Lhev
 Mercado. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRecently
recently
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to this neighborhood, I found this place quiet and cozy and the neighbor have a welcoming nature, and my friend that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 here encourage me to Did you mean "move"?move
moved
 here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 most of the facility are pretty amazing that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can enjoy.

Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
i'm
Possible spelling mistake found.writingwrithinggrittingwittingwrit ting
writting
 this letter to invite you to my upcoming party, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to know each other better as a neighbor. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
i'm
 worried about it might have Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
Possible spelling mistake found.inconvenient
incovienient
 on your behalf This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the noise from the party. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?therefore,
therefore
Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
i'm
also
 looking forward for your agreement about the party.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 accept this fruit basket as a token of my gratitude to be part of this Possible spelling mistake found.subdivision
subdivison
, Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
i'm
 hoping that someday we can know each other and bond to have a better Possible spelling mistake found.neighborhood
neigborhood
 without circumstances. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterI
i
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much hope that to hear from you shortly.

Yours sincerely
.

Cherry Possible spelling mistake found.HEVLHV
Lhev
 Mercado