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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

Dear, Sir Cruz I hope this letter finds you well, I'm Cherry Mercado an IT Specialist in your company. I'm writing this letter regards to degree qualification that i need to accomplished. I've been working for this requirement for a few months, and i would like to request to have a off day to finished the requirements that takes only for two days. If you allow me to have a time off, I will do my best to accomplished immediately the requirements to have a better experience and knowdelge to improved my status in your company. This is a great opportunity for me and also for your company to achieve a superior learning to stabilize the IT operation in the office. I will work for extra time, to complete my task in my absence for two days. I look forward for your understanding and consideration to fulfilled my job description. I look forward for your immediate responds. Yours Sincerely. Cherry Mercado
Dear, Sir Cruz

I hope this letter finds you well, I'm Cherry Mercado an IT Specialist in your
company
. I'm writing this letter regards to degree qualification that
i
need to accomplished.
I
've been working for this requirement for a few months, and
i
would like to request to have
a
off day
to finished
the requirements that takes
only
for two days.

If you
allow
me to have a time off, I will do my best to accomplished immediately the requirements to have a better experience and
knowdelge
to
improved
my status in your
company
. This is a great opportunity for me and
also
for your
company
to achieve a superior learning to stabilize the IT operation in the office.

I will work for extra time, to complete my task in my absence for two days. I look forward for your understanding and consideration to fulfilled my job description.

I
look forward for your immediate
responds
.

Yours
Sincerely
.

Cherry Mercado
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IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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