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You received a letter from your bank which was supposed to have a credit card in it. Upon receiving, you found that card was not there. Write a letter to your bank manager.

Dear Mr Mark, The impetus behind writing this letter is to inform you about a mishap regarding receiving of my credit card against a recently opened bank account. The matter of the fact is that I was due to receive a credit card in current week but when the parcel arrived, the card was missing somehow. Keeping in view the level of professional practices of your bank, I am sure the negligence could be on the part of courier company. The account belongs to a charitable organization working for the welfare of children with leukemia. Being having the responsibility of taking care of their financial resources, I would suggest you to please cancel the validity of credit card by blocking it. This step, in my opinion, will help secure the money and data associated with the card and the account. I would suggest you to please hold the issuance of duplicate credit card until the issue is resolved, as it must be noted that the money belongs to children who deserve it for the sake of their lives. I hope you will enquire the matter on priority and point out the culprit behind it. Yours sincerely, Benjamin Franklin
Dear Mr Mark,

The impetus behind writing this letter is to inform you about a mishap regarding receiving of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
credit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
against a recently opened bank account. The matter of the fact is that I was due to receive a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
credit
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card
in
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current
week
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but
when the parcel arrived, the
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card
was missing somehow. Keeping in view the level of professional practices of your bank, I am sure the negligence could be on the part of courier
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company
.

The account belongs to a charitable organization working for the welfare of children with leukemia. Being having the responsibility of taking care of their financial resources, I would suggest you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
cancel the validity of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
credit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
by blocking it. This step, in my opinion, will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
secure the money and data associated with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
and the account.

I would suggest you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
hold the issuance of duplicate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
credit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
card
until the issue
is resolved
, as it
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must
be noted
that the money belongs to children who deserve it for the sake of their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
.

I hope you will
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
the matter on priority and point out the culprit behind it.

Yours
sincerely
,

Benjamin Franklin
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IELTS letter You received a letter from your bank which was supposed to have a credit card in it. Upon receiving, you found that card was not there. Write a letter to your bank manager.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
197 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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