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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

Dear Mr, and Mrs Salcedo I hope you are doing great. I'm writing this letter regards to your complaint about the noise on the other day. By the way I'am Cherry Lhev Mercado. I would like to apologize that we don't know each other even we are on the same neighborhood. I sincerely apologizing about the incovinient that happen last monday. Recently, my sister bring her dog to my house, because she need to leave for a few day's and no one will look for her dog. Therefor, she decide to bring it to my house the dog is unfamiliar for the new environment. Perhaps that is the reason he's furiously barking. I understand your discontenment about what happen and again I'am very sorry for that and reassure that will never happen again. I really regret the event and asking for forgiveness. Please accept this fruit basket as a token of my deepest regret, thanks for understanding. Yours Sincerely, Cherry Lhev Mercado
Dear Mr, and Mrs
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Salcedo


I hope you are doing great. I'm writing this letter regards to your complaint about the noise on the other day. By the way I'am Cherry
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Lhev
Mercado. I would like to apologize that we don't know each other even we are on the same neighborhood.

I
sincerely
apologizing about the
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incovinient
that happen last
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monday
. Recently, my sister bring her dog to my
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house
,
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because
she need to
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leave
for a few
Incorrect plural form; it does not need any apostrophe. Did you mean "days"?
day's
and no one will look for her dog. Therefor, she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "decides", "decided".
decide
to bring it to my
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house
the dog is unfamiliar for the new environment. Perhaps
that is
the reason he's
furiously
barking.

I understand your
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discontenment
about what happen and again I'am
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very
sorry for that and reassure that will never happen again.

I
really
regret the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
and asking for forgiveness.
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Please
accept this fruit basket as a token of my deepest regret, thanks for understanding.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Cherry
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Lhev
Mercado

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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