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. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter · explain the reasons for the noise · apologise · describe what action you will take

. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter · explain the reasons for the noise · apologise · describe what action you will take V1DQ
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing this letter to express my apologies for the disturbance created at mid night last week. I had my birthday and my friends came over at mid night to give me a surprise. I was clue less about this and never thought of their presence at that hour. Let me explain you in detail, We were cutting the birthday cake in the living room, the window of the living room is next to your window. They started singing birthday song loudly which was greater than need. They had few balloons which they busted, it created more noise and later we were chatting all night having coffee together. The whole night we were talking without realizing that the amount of noise we are creating. I am extremely sorry for such behavior. Henceforth, I assure you that such incident will never happen again. I will make sure that next time when my friends are here, I ask them to talk softly and ask them to apologies you for the incident. Your Sincerely, XYZ
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing this letter to express my apologies for the disturbance created at mid
night
last week. I had my birthday and my friends came over at mid
night
to give me a surprise.
I
was clue less about this and never
thought
of their presence at that hour.

Let
me
explain
you in detail, We were cutting the birthday cake in the living room, the window of the living room is
next
to your window. They
started
singing birthday song
loudly
which was greater than need. They had few balloons which they busted, it created more noise and later we were chatting all
night
having coffee together. The whole
night
we were talking without realizing that the amount of noise we are creating. I am
extremely
sorry for such behavior.

Henceforth, I assure you that such incident will never happen again. I will
make
sure that
next
time when my friends are here, I ask them to talk
softly
and ask them
to apologies
you for the incident.

Your
Sincerely
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter . Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter · explain the reasons for the noise · apologise · describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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