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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take rQBl

Dear Ahmed, Hope you are doing well. I have received a letter on yesterday from you about the noise from my flat. My washing machine is causing that noise and it is really bothering me also. I guess washing machine motor has been jammed and it is the principal reason of that awful noise. I am really sorry for the disturbence coming out from my flat. I have signed up for a repairing service with sheba. xyz for reparing and servicing of washing machine. They have given a tentative date for that service on Monday evening. After consulting them I will be able to take a proper decision. If they give me any negative reponses I will take the decision to buy a brand new washing machine by this weekend. Thanking you. Hope to have some get together some time. your's XXX

Dear Ahmed,

Hope you are doing well.

I have received a letter on yesterday from you about the noise from my flat. My washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 is causing that noise and it is really
 bothering me also
. I guess washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 motor has been jammed
 and it is the principal reason of that awful noise.

I am really
 sorry for the Possible spelling mistake found.disturbance
disturbence
 coming out from my flat.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have signed up for a repairing service with Possible spelling mistake found.ShebaShea
sheba
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterXyz
xyz
 for Possible spelling mistake found.preparingrearingrepairingrepayingrepaving
reparing
 and servicing of washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
. They have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 a tentative date for that service on Monday evening. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 consulting them I will be able to take a proper decision. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 they give me any This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
Possible spelling mistake found.responsesreposes
reponses
 I will take the decision to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a 'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".brand-new
brand new
 washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 by this weekend.

Thanking you.

Hope to have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 together This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time.

Did you mean "your" or "yours"?youryours
your's
 XXX

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

141 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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