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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay: 1. Tone (formal or informal) Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e.g. Dear Mr. Smith,) and end with “Yours sincerely,”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly. 2. Purpose The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e.g. I am writing to inform you that...). Then cover the

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay: 1. Tone (formal or informal) Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e. g. Dear Mr. Smith, ) and end with “Yours sincerely, ”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly. 2. Purpose The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e. g. I am writing to inform you that. . . ). Then cover the rQ7l
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to complete MBA courses this semester. I have been serving as a full time associate at The City Bank Limited, Dhaka Main Branch. I am assigned to loan department. Due to tremendous work pressure I usually leave office after 8. 00 in the evening. My MBA classes starts at 7. 00 in the evening. After commuting to university to take MBA classes I most of the time miss half of the class duration. Missing half of the class lecture will not give me any fruitful learning. Therefore, I request you to drop my enrollment of this semester. There is a possibility that I might be able to shift to a less busy department shortly then I will be able to take MBA courses. Thank you. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely Yours
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to complete MBA courses this semester. I have been serving as a full time associate at The City Bank Limited, Dhaka Main Branch.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am assigned
to loan department. Due to tremendous work pressure I
usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
office after 8. 00 in the evening. My MBA
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
at 7. 00 in the evening.

“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
commuting to university to take MBA
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
I most of the time miss half of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
duration. Missing half of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
lecture will not give me any fruitful learning.

Therefore
, I request you to drop my enrollment of this semester. There is a possibility that I might be able to shift to a less busy department shortly then I will be able to take MBA courses.

Thank you.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely
Yours
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , There are three main things to consider before writing your essay: 1. Tone (formal or informal) Sometimes students are friendly with their tutors, but I think it would be better to write a formal letter. Start with your tutor’s surname (e. g. Dear Mr. Smith, ) and end with “Yours sincerely, ”. Avoid contractions (write “I am” instead of “I’m”), and avoid using informal idioms or expressions. Be polite rather than friendly. 2. Purpose The main purpose of this letter is to inform your tutor that you are leaving the course. Make this clear straight away (e. g. I am writing to inform you that. . . ). Then cover the

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7 paragraphs
148 words
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