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Write an application letter to the directer of touristic center.

Write an application letter to the directer of touristic center. deaK
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for a job of being guide at your touristic center which I saw advertised in "MY5" channel. I am twenty-eight years old obtained a degree English as a foreign language in NSPI in 2012. I am presently working as a teacher in IELTS education center. In addition to this, I learn French, Arabic Korean languages very well. I feel have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I have Bachelor's degree English as a foreign language and have worked extensively with young adults, teaching English. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. If you would like to me to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of "Samarkand tour". I look forward to hearing from you soon. Your sincerely, Kate Johnson
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for a job of being
guide
at your touristic center which I
saw
advertised in
"
MY5
"
channel. I am twenty-eight years
old
obtained a degree English as a foreign language in
NSPI
in 2012. I am
presently
working as a teacher in IELTS education center.
In addition
to this, I learn French, Arabic Korean languages
very
well. I feel have
many
of the
important
qualifications needed for this job. I have Bachelor's degree English as a foreign language and have worked
extensively
with young adults, teaching English.
I
am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
.
I
am
currently
looking for a position that will
allow
me to develop my
skills
and experience. If you would like to me to attend an interview, I would be able to
come
at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of
"
Samarkand tour
"
. I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.
Your
sincerely
, Kate
Johnson
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IELTS letter Write an application letter to the directer of touristic center.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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