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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take r8Y6J
Hi Shally This is your neighbor Harpal, I am very sad to listen from you that you have to endure such a loud noise from my house which is created by our dog. Actually, I have two dogs: Ranku and Jammu. Yesterday my parents came to my house and picked Jamu with them that is the reason Ranku was out of control because He was finding Jamu each and everywhere when he didn’t get him he started barking loudly. Even though I tried to distract his mind by giving him food but he was out of my control. I can understand how difficult it is to sleep at night time when there is a lot of noise around you. I promise you it will never happen again because I am going to bring Jammu back home so I trust him he will quiet after see him. Looking to hear from you Regards Harpal
Hi
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Shally


This is your neighbor
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Harpal
, I am
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very
sad to listen from you that you
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have to
endure such a loud noise from my
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house
which
is created
by our dog. Actually, I have two dogs: Ranku and
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Jammu
. Yesterday my parents came to my
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house
and picked
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Jamu
with them
that is
the reason Ranku was out of control
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because
He was finding
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Jamu
each and everywhere when he didn’t
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get
him he
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started
barking
loudly
.
Even though
I tried to distract his mind by giving him food
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but
he was out of my control.

I can understand how difficult it is to sleep at
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night time
when there is
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a lot of
noise around you. I promise you it will never happen again
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because
I am going to bring
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Jammu
back home
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so
I trust him he will quiet after
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see
him.

Looking to hear from you

Regards

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Harpal

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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