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You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Snyder,

You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Snyder, Jo0Va
Dear Ms. Snyder, I am writing this letter in order to inform you regarding my plans to take a leave during work week eighteen. As you are aware that our project would be completed by work week fifteen and all the necessary documents and presentations for clients are scheduled to be completed by work week seventeen, I would like to take time-off for a week to spend quality time with my family, before the next project begins. So, I would like to take vacation during work week eighteen, which is from 04/26/2021 to 04/30/2021. I would be out of town during that week but I made sure that our team could always reach out to me via mobile at 1701869432. Regarding the project progress, all modules are functionally correct and the code is bug free. The code is ready to be deployed. Based on our learnings from previous projects, I have trained Mr. Smith on potential issues that we might come up with. Also, Mrs. Douglas is my back up for client queries and supervision while I am away. Thank you in advance. Looking forward for your approval. Yours faithfully,
Dear Ms. Snyder,

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I made sure that our team could always reach out to me via mobile at 1701869432.

Regarding the
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progress, all modules are
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correct and the code is bug free. The code is ready to
be deployed
. Based on our learnings from previous
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, I have trained Mr. Smith on potential issues that we might
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Thank you in advance. Looking forward for your approval.

Yours
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IELTS letter You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Snyder,

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