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You made a friend when you visited another city a few months ago. This friend has come to your city for some work and will stay for another week. You want to invite this friend to your home for dinner. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, express how you feel about him/her visiting your city invite the friend to your home for dinner give location and date when you would want him/her to come

You made a friend when you visited another city a few months ago. This friend has come to your city for some work and will stay for another week. You want to invite this friend to your home for dinner. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, express how you feel about him/her visiting your city invite the friend to your home for dinner give location and date when you would want him/her to come E3N7r
Dear John, How are you? Hope this letter finds you at the peak of your health and spirit. I am also fine. I was happy when I got the news, you are coming to my city next week in an order to your work. I am writing this letter to invite you for dinner at my house because, after our last meeting at your office, I was looking to meet you for knowing each other. Anyway, I would be grateful if you could come to join my family at dinner at my place because after I describe to my family how you help me to arrangeeverything when I came to your town for a presentation. So, they all want to thank you for your hospitality which you showed to me. Besides, I am going to arrange this dinner for December 4th at my house. I am living just 15 minutes away from your hotel and you just need to drive 10 minutes to the west side and then make first right then 5 minutes to the south side and then you will reach block 5, my house is on the left side tower facing the east side. In case of any confusion, you can call on my number anytime. Hope to see you soon. Warm Wishes, Mark Hill.
Dear John, How are you? Hope this letter finds you at the peak of your health and spirit. I am
also
fine. I was happy when I
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got
the news, you are coming to my city
next
week in an order to your work.
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I
am writing this letter to invite you for dinner at my
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house
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because
, after our last meeting at your office, I was looking to
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meet
you for knowing each other. Anyway, I would be grateful if you could
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come
to
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join
my family at dinner at my place
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because
after I
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describe
to my family how you
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help
me to
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arrangeeverything
when I came to your town for a presentation.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, they all want to thank you for your hospitality which you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
to me.
Besides
, I am going to arrange this dinner for December 4th at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. I am living
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just
15 minutes away from your hotel and you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
need to drive 10 minutes to the west side and then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
first
right then 5 minutes to the south side and then you will reach block 5, my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
is on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side tower facing the east side. In case of any confusion, you can call on my number anytime. Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Warm Wishes, Mark Hill.
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IELTS letter You made a friend when you visited another city a few months ago. This friend has come to your city for some work and will stay for another week. You want to invite this friend to your home for dinner. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, express how you feel about him/her visiting your city invite the friend to your home for dinner give location and date when you would want him/her to come

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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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