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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come 85g6r

Hello John, My name is Steve Nash and I recently moved to this neighborhood. I am living next to your house and wanted to introduce myself to you. I moved here from New Jersey and its my first time living in Texas. I work as a manager at Bank of America in downtown. I am planning for a housewarming party and would like to invite you and your family for dinner next friday. However, I am also inviting few of my friends to this housewarming party and I was wondering if you can call me at 459-334-5088 and let me know of your plans to attend this party. This party will not be a very long and should start at 7 PM until midnight. Hope to hear back from you soon and please let me know your plans to attend, so I can make necessary arrangements for food and beverages. Yours Sincerely Steve Nash

Hello John,

My name is Steve Nash and I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to this neighborhood. I am living next
 to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and wanted to introduce myself to you. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 here from New Jersey and Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 my first
 time living in Texas. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 work as a manager at Bank of America in downtown. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am planning for a housewarming You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 and would like to invite you and your family for dinner next
Possible spelling mistake found.FridayFridays
friday
. However
, I am also
 inviting few of my friends to this housewarming Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).party, and
party and
 I was wondering if you can call me at 459-334-5088 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know of your plans to attend this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 will not be a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 long and should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 at 7 PM until midnight. Hope to hear back from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know your plans to attend, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 necessary arrangements for food and beverages.

Yours Sincerely


Steve Nash