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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. oloB
Dear Mr. Kingra, I am apologyied for the noises which you hears from my side. The niose which you hears usually comes from our TV because of the home thearthre and the sound bar which my kids bought without my permission. At night they have bad habit to watch a movie before going to bed. I kindly ask you for forgiveness for the trouble and i will make sure that you will never ever hear any loud noise from my side. I hope that this mistake will not end our good relation and things can be noraml again as it used to be. From now on i will make sure that things will changeand replace the sound system with small speakers and nextly i will try to change the place of sound system and try to put more insulation in floor and walls so that sound cannot travel and distrub others.
Dear Mr.
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Kingra
, I am
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apologyied
for the noises which you
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hears
from my side. The
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niose
which you
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hears
usually
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from our TV
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because
of the home
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thearthre
and the
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sound
bar which my kids
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bought
without my permission. At
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night they
have
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bad
habit to
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watch
a movie
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before
going to bed.

I kindly ask you for forgiveness for the trouble and
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i
will
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make
sure that you will never ever hear any loud noise from my side. I hope that this mistake will not
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end
our
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good
relation and things can be
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noraml
again as it
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used
to be.

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now
on
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i
will
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make
sure that things will
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changeand
replace the
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sound
system with
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small
speakers and
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nextly
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i
will try to
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change
the place of
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sound
system and try to put more insulation in floor and walls
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so
that
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cannot travel and
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distrub
others.
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

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3 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
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