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You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved LX0G

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you about an advice about the cafeteria that you may consider in order to provide a better experience for your customers. First of all, I am a regular. I eat from the variety of meals that the cafeteria offers five days a week. And I must say I am a big fan of how you manage the facility. Without any doubt, the meals are healthy as well as the portions are well sized. Also, the seating of the cafeteria offers more natural light which I like the most about spending my lunch time there. However, there is an issue I am highly concerned with. To me and some of my colleagues, the sound levels of the speakers above the seats are too loud. Thus, sometimes it gets very hard for people to hear what others are saying. Especially for people over a certain age that already have problems with possible hearing losses. In order to check If the sound levels in the cafeteria you can simply use a smartphone with proper free applications you can get from the app store. Then you can adjust the volume levels and set a maximum at least for the busy hours. Yours faithfully, Jack Black

Dear Sir/Madam,

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an advice
 about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsnack barlunchroom
cafeteria
 that you may consider in order to provide a better experience for your customers.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I am a regular. I eat from the variety of meals that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsnack barlunchroom
cafeteria
 offers five days a week. And I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 say I am a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 fan of how you manage the facility.

Without any doubt, the meals are healthy as well
 as the portions are well sized. Also
, the seating of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsnack barlunchroom
cafeteria
 offers more natural light which I like the most about spending my This word is normally spelled as one.lunchtime
lunch time
 there.

However
, there is an issue I am highly
 concerned with. To me and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of my colleagues, the sound levels of the speakers above the seats are too loud. Thus
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to hear what others are saying.

Especially
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 over a certain age that already have problems with possible hearing losses.

In order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 If the sound levels in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsnack barlunchroom
cafeteria
 you can simply
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 a smartphone with proper free applications you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 from the app store. Then you can adjust the volume levels and set a maximum at least for the busy hours.

Yours faithfully
,

Jack Black