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Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this

Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this elgO
Dear Sir/Madam, I am a loyal subscriber of your newspaper for past 3 years. I am born and brought up in Kodagu town in Karnataka. I was very excited when an article on my town was published in the Lifestyle magazine, under Destinations segment on 21st February 2021. While the pictures and the article overall were very enticing but there was some information that had factual errors. Firstly, your Kodagu article mentions only about various Hotels which the visitors can book, however for past 1-year homestays are a popular choice. Homestays are far better ways to experience the people, cuisine, and culture of Kodagu. Secondly, you mentioned Nagahole Tiger reserve to be the only place to visit whereas there are other places like Dubare Elephant camp (40 km from Kodagu) and Kambini river rafting (80 km from Kodagu). These corrections will attract more people to Kodagu, as people depend on tourism as a source of income. Thank you, and I hope to see a printed correction on Kodagu in your next issue. Yours faithfully, Debi
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a loyal subscriber of your newspaper for past 3 years. I
am born
and brought up in
Kodagu
town in Karnataka.

I
was
very
excited when an article on my town
was published
in the Lifestyle magazine, under Destinations segment on 21st February 2021. While the pictures and the article
overall
were
very
enticing
but
there was
some
information that had factual errors.
Firstly
, your
Kodagu
article mentions
only
about various Hotels which the visitors can book,
however
for past 1-year homestays are a popular choice. Homestays are far better ways to experience the
people
, cuisine, and culture of
Kodagu
.
Secondly
, you mentioned
Nagahole
Tiger reserve to be the
only
place to visit whereas there are other places like
Dubare
Elephant camp (40 km from
Kodagu
) and
Kambini
river rafting (80 km from
Kodagu
). These corrections will attract more
people
to
Kodagu
, as
people
depend on tourism as a source of income.

Thank you, and I hope to
see
a printed correction on
Kodagu
in your
next
issue.

Yours
faithfully
,

Debi
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IELTS letter Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: • how you know about this city/town • what information was incorrect • what the editor should do about this

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  American English
6 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
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