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You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. qlJD
Dear Mr. Singh, I am Harpreet Kaur, Junior engineer in the software department of your esteemed organisation. I am writing this letter to take study leave for one month. I would like to inform you that at present i am persuing my masters in computers and i have to appear for my final examinations in the upcoming month i. e April. I request you to grant me leave for one month so that i can completely focus on my academic performance. Moreover, you would be elated to know that all the ongoing projects which were going on under my guidance are completed and the project reports are also submitted to the senior officer. I assure you that i would be in touch with my collegues and in case of any emergency i would definitely report to the company. In addition, the course which i am going to appear for will be beneficial for my job as there are various languages being taught which would help me in improving my skills and will be merits for the company. Hope you would consider my request. Yours faithfully, Harpreet
Dear Mr. Singh,

I am
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Harpreet
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Kaur
, Junior engineer in the software department of your esteemed
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organisation
. I am writing this letter to take study
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leave
for one month.

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I
would like to inform you that at present
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i
am
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persuing
my masters in computers and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
appear for my final examinations in the upcoming month i. e April.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
request you to grant me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
for one month
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
Did you mean "I"?
i
can completely focus on my academic performance.

Moreover
, you would
be elated
to know that all the ongoing projects which were going on under my guidance
are completed
and the project reports are
also
submitted to the senior officer. I assure you that
Did you mean "I"?
i
would be in touch with my
Possible spelling mistake found.
collegues
and in case of any emergency
Did you mean "I"?
i
would definitely report to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

In addition
, the course which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am going to appear for will be beneficial for my job as there are various languages
being taught
which would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me in improving my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and will be merits for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Hope you would consider my request.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Harpreet
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IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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185 words
6.0
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