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Letter to manager for training course

Letter to manager for training course Gnjo

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to discuss about a training course on IOT Security that I have recently discovered online. It seems to be an excellent course and I am willing to enrol in to it. It's a month long course followed by a certification exam. The course will cover all aspects of securing IOT devices which includes device security testing, secure code development and last but not the least malware testing for IOT devices. As you might be aware of the fact that IOT is the future and our company has recently started developing IOT features, I believe that this will be a great add-on as we have not started focusing on IOT security yet. This course also offers group study material which will be eventually helpful for our team. I hope that I will be able to use personal growth credits offered by our organisation to pay for this course. I have raised a request for the same in employee portal and would really appreciate if you can approve the same. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Ranjan

Dear Sir,

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 on IOT Security that I have recently discovered online.

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 I am willing to enrol in to it.

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Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely
,

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