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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer 57lQ

Dear Astha, I am delighted to receive your letter after a very long time and happy to know that you're planning a camping trip this summer. I'm glad to know that you are seeking my advice for the camping vacation. Firstly, I'm sure that you will enjoy this trip as you're a nature lover. Do you recall our schooldays when we used to enjoy our walk near the lake during free-time? It was so much fun! These camping trips also has nature walks organized through the woods which I bet you will enjoy. Away from the hustle bustle of the city, you will be charmed with the beautiful scenery and peaceful surroundings. You can certainly enjoy the sunset in the evening as well. On the other hand, there are a few possible disadvantages. A major drawback is sharing of bathrooms and you don't prefer doing that. But there's no option of having a separate toilet for every traveller. Also camping are done nearer to nature, so there could a lot of mosquitoes. Ensure you carry mosquito repellent cream and apply on a regular basis. I'd love to accompany you in this trip but I've already enrolled myself in a music class to learn guitar. It was my long time dream to learn playing guitar. I wish you an excellent and safe summer camping. I can't wait to hear from you once you are back from the vacation. Your friend Tuheen

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I can't wait to hear from you once you are back from the vacation.

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