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write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things.

write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things. 0G33
Dearest Mandeep, I hope you and your family are all well. It was great to see you when we met last time. I was overjoyed when when i saw a letter that you coming back to visit us next month. I was really looking forward to see you. In your letter you write down that you are going to stay with us. I really want to apologies that this time i cannot accomodate you at my house. The main reason behind this that our house is so full right now becouse my family come over to stay with us. But you do not need to take any strees becouse I already sort out your accomation somewhere else. It is near my house and very conviennient to transport and market. hoping to hear from you soon. yours lovingly, joban
Dearest
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Mandeep
,

I hope you and your family are all well. It was great to
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see
you when we met last time.

I
was overjoyed
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when when
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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saw
a letter that you coming back to visit us
next
month. I

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was
really
looking forward to
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see
you.

In your letter you write down that you are going to stay with us. I
really
want
Did you mean "to apologize" (American English) or "to apologise" (British English)?
to apologies


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that
this time
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i
cannot
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accomodate
you at my
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house
. The main reason behind this that our
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house


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is
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so
full right
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now
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becouse
my family
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come
over to stay with us.

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But
you do not need to take any
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strees
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becouse
I already sort out your
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accomation
somewhere else.

It is near my
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house
and
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very
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conviennient
to transport and market.

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hoping
to hear from you
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soon
.

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yours
lovingly
,

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joban

IELTS letter write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things.

Letter
  American English
12 paragraphs
137 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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