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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take oRpeb
Dear Sneha, I have received your complaint regarding the noise that is coming from my flat. Firstly, I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused and thank you for bringing this to my notice. Owing to the lockdown the schools are shut down and the kids have become restless as they do not have any work in particular to do and are neither allowed to go out and play with their friends. Which is why they have ended up in binge watching with really high volume and loud music. I totally agree that is not acceptable and disturbing for others. My sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused so far. I promise that this will not be repeated again. In fact, I have decided to remove the television and internet connection to divert them on to books from entertainment. Also, the online classes are starting from next week. Therefore, there won't be any kind of noise or disturbance for you anymore. Once again, am sorry for the trouble. Yours sincerely, Akirah
Dear
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Sneha
,

I have received your complaint regarding the noise
that is
coming from my flat.
Firstly
, I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused and thank you for bringing this to my notice.

Owing to the lockdown the schools
are shut
down and the kids have become restless as they do not have any work
in particular
to do and are neither
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to go out and play with their friends. Which is why they have ended up in
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
binge watching
with
really
high volume and loud music. I
totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that is
not acceptable and disturbing for others.

My sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
far. I promise that this will not be
Consider using "repeated".
repeated again
. In fact, I have decided to remove the television and internet connection to divert them on to books from entertainment.
Also
, the online classes are starting from
next
week.
Therefore
, there won't be any kind of noise or disturbance for you anymore.

Once again, am sorry for the trouble.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Akirah
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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