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You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly

You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly RNl9o
Dear Mr BrownI am writing in the hope of that you can help me with a problem regarding my car that I repaired three days ago from your car service office. It has worked properly, but today when I was driving on my way to work, it began suddenly ti make noise from the engine. So I turned off the engine and started it again. Unfortunately, once more the same situation happened. I would like you to check my car's problem and I expect to receive better service which I want. I look forward to receiving a reply Yours sincerelySue Johnson
Dear Mr
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me with a problem regarding my car that I repaired three days ago from your car service office. It has worked
properly
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today
when I was driving on my way to work, it began
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noise from the engine.
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I turned off the engine and
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started
it again. Unfortunately, once more the same situation happened. I would like you to
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check
my car's problem and I
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to receive better service which I want. I look forward to receiving a reply Yours
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sincerelySue
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Johnson

IELTS letter You recently had your car repaired and now it is not working properly

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  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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