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Letter to rent service apartment for new years in Singapore

Letter to rent service apartment for new years in Singapore BJmxj

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regards to an inquiry about renting a service apartment for my vacation in the country of Singapore with some close friends and family. My name is Dave Brown and I am a resident of Georgia state US and for celebrating this new years eve some of our friends and family members have decided to visit the beautiful city of Singapore because of it’s mesmerizing new years eve celebrations which are famous around the globe. We intend to hire an apartment which should have at least 3 bedrooms with a well-equipped kitchen and view of the entire Singapore city. Since we are accompanied by children as well, having a play area within the vicinity would be preferred. We have already booked our flights and will be arriving in the country on 10th December 2020, we would like to stay in the city itself until 10th January 2021 which is the day of our return flight. As mentioned above, Singapore is famous for its new year celebrations so if you can suggest or make reservations for the group of 15 people (including children) for a famous carnival would be a delighting. I would kindly request you to help us with the average cost per person for the requirements mentioned above so that we plan our vacation well though we already have a budget of around 100 USD per person per night already reserved for our lodging requirement but having a clear idea would help to avoid any last-minute surprises. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Dave Brown.

Dear Sir/Madam,

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I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely
,

Dave Brown. 