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you have a job advertisement for the children care association who are looking for volunteers. write a letter to the organization for this job.

you have a job advertisement for the children care association who are looking for volunteers. write a letter to the organization for this job. qVeNG

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in the response to your advertisement for volunteers work for the children's care association. I would like to work for your organization as a volunteer and I am hoping that you would give me the opportunity. Recently, I have done 2 years of diploma in the child care studies and currently, I am working part-time In the local kinder garden schools for last 6 months. So, I would be perfect for this position also It would allow me to learn new skills. Regarding my interest, I have a keen interest in this job because I love to spend time with children and take care of them. Besides, this job will help me to use my study as work practically. I am available to work every day from 7: 00 am to 8: 00 pm except on Saturday and Sunday. On top of that, I am also live close to the organization which would really make it easy for me to commute. I am hoping to hear a positive response from you. Yours Faithfully, ABC.

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So
, I would be perfect for this position also
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allow
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. Regarding my interest, I have a keen interest in this job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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love
 to spend time with children and take care of them. Besides
, this job will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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use
 my study as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
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. I am available to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
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 every day from 7: 00 am to 8: 00 pm except on Saturday and Sunday. On top of that
, I am also
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live
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make
 it easy for me to commute. I am hoping to hear a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response from you. Yours Faithfully
, ABC. 