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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear John, I hope everything going well with you and your family. I heard about your complain about the noise coming from my house, and I would like to tell that the reason behind it is that I have been redecorate my living room and my kitchen these past weeks. So I want to apologise sencerely and tell you that I am very sorry that you have been annoyed by the noise, and please tell your famil that I am sorry. As for the noise you may tell me a convient time for you so I can make it work with my staff. For me I think working in hte afternoon is a good time, please let me know if that fit with you. And there is one week left and we are done with the redocration so I hope we can agree on time. I cant wait hearing from you. sencerely, Najla Abdullah
Dear John,

I hope everything going well with you and your family. I heard about your
The word ‘complain’ is a verb. Did you mean the noun “complaint”?
complain
about the noise coming from my
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house
, and I would like to
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tell
that the reason behind it is that I have been
Consider using either the past participle “redecorated” or the present participle “redecorating” here.
redecorate
my living room and my kitchen these past weeks.
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So
I want to
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apologise
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sencerely
and
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tell
you that I am
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very
sorry that you have
been annoyed
by the noise, and
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please
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tell
your
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famil
that I am sorry. As for the noise you may
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tell
me a
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convient
time for you
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so
I can
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make
it work with my staff. For
Consider adding a comma here.
me
I
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think
working in
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hte
afternoon is a
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good
time,
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please
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let
me know if that fit with you. And there is one week
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
left and
we
are done
with the redocration
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so
I hope we can
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agree
on time.

I
Did you mean “can’t” or “cannot”?
cant
wait hearing from you.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
sencerely
,

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Najla
Abdullah

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
153 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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