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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Dear George, You were so kind, and God sent for taking care of me after I was involved in an accident last Monday. I am writing this letter to express my gratefulness for your selfless act. I am Kim Scott and I live on the 45th avenue of Berkley Road, Calabasas. I work as a senior manager for a telecom company “Techno Tech”. Last Monday, I was headed for my office and when I reached the end of the main road to take a left turn, a bike suddenly hit me from the back. At first, I was shocked as if it was an earthquake and fell unconscious. I woke up at the hospital today and the first thing that my family told me was, that how you bought me to the hospital and took care of me for two days until my family was reached. You are truly a compassionate person and a true example of humanity. I would like to invite you to my home for lunch or dinner so that I can thank you personally. Please let me know about your availability. Looking forward to your response Yours truly, Kourtney

Dear George,

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so
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sent
 for taking care of me after I was involved
 in an accident last Monday. I am writing this letter to express my gratefulness for your selfless act.

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live
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I
 work as a senior manager for a telecom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 “Techno Tech”. Last Monday, I was headed
 for my office and when I reached the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the main road to take a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 turn, a bike suddenly
 hit me from the back. At first
, I was shocked
 as if it was an earthquake and fell unconscious. I woke up at the hospital This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 and the first
 thing that my family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me was, that how you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 me to the hospital and took care of me for two days until my family was reached
. You are truly
 a compassionate person and a true example of humanity.

I would like to invite you to my home for lunch or dinner This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can thank you personally
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know about your availability.

Looking forward to your response

Yours truly
,

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Kourtney