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You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: 1. Explain why you are interested in helping 2. Give details on suitable past experience 3. Suggest ways you might help with the event

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Sneha. I am writing this letter with reference to the advertisement for volunteers given by your organization in the newspaper. I am very much interested in helping because it gives me a lot of happiness and bonding experience. Moreover, it gives me a sense of satisfaction. I have been working as a volunteer for various charity organizations since 2015. I worked as a volunteer on an outreach programme for orphanages during my college days. Besides, I had associated with various fund-raising campaigns for the cancer patients. I am a good singer and having a connection with around 10 singers, so I can conduct a musical programme to raise the money on your charity event for physically disabled people. Moreover, I can arrange some sponsors who are willing to donate money for the physically disabled people. I hope I would be a part for this noble cause. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Sneha Number of words: 159
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is
Sneha
. I am writing this letter with reference to the advertisement for volunteers
given
by your organization in the newspaper. I am
very
much interested in helping
because
it gives me
a lot of
happiness and bonding experience.
Moreover
, it gives me a sense of satisfaction.

I have been working as a volunteer for various charity organizations since 2015. I worked as a volunteer on an outreach
programme
for orphanages during my college days.
Besides
, I had associated with various fund-raising campaigns for the cancer patients.

I am a
good
singer and having a connection with around 10 singers,
so
I can conduct a musical
programme
to raise the money on your charity
event
for
physically
disabled
people
.
Moreover
, I can arrange
some
sponsors who are willing to donate money for the
physically
disabled
people
.

I hope I would be a part for this noble cause.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Regards,

Sneha


Number of words: 159
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IELTS letter You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: 1. Explain why you are interested in helping 2. Give details on suitable past experience 3. Suggest ways you might help with the event

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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