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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Dear Jhon You were so kind, and God sent you for taking care of me after I was involved in an accident last Monday. I am Aman, and for the last few years I an living in Baily Road, Dhaka. I have been working in a Supply chain Management Company named ABC. Last Monday I leave the office at noon and when I was trying to cross the main street by using Zebra Crossing a bike hid me from the backside. At that time I realized that it was an earthquake. After that, I couldn't remember anything. But when I got the sense I had discovered myself in the hospital. I came to know from my family member that you had worked a lot from bringing me to the hospital and find my family member. Also, my relatives informed me that you take care of me continuously for 48 hours. It is my pleasure that an unknown man took care of me without thinking and hesitation. I realize that humanity is still alive. I would like to invite you and your family for lunch or diner so that I can thank you personally. Please let me know your availability. Looking Forward to your response Your truly Aman
Dear
Jhon


You were
so
kind, and God
sent
you for taking care of me after I
was involved
in an accident last Monday.

I am
Aman
, and for the last few years I
an
living in
Baily
Road, Dhaka. I have been working in a Supply chain Management
Company
named ABC. Last Monday I
leave
the office at noon and when I was trying to cross the main street by using Zebra Crossing a bike hid me from the backside. At that time I realized that it was an earthquake. After that, I couldn't remember anything.
But
when I
got
the sense I had discovered myself in the hospital. I came to know from my family member that you had worked a lot from bringing me to the hospital and find my family member.
Also
, my relatives informed me that you take care of me
continuously
for 48 hours. It is my pleasure that an unknown
man
took care of me without thinking and hesitation. I realize that humanity is
still
alive.

I would like to invite you and your family for lunch or diner
so
that I can thank you
personally
.
Please
let
me know your availability.

Looking Forward to your response

Your
truly


Aman
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

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  American English
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206 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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