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Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit

Dear grandma, How are you? How is going on your life? I miss you so much grandma. What is the clymate in our home town there? Here my studies are going well. My hostel warden is very strict. Consequently my mobile phone would not in my hand mostly time. So I could not accept your phone calls. I'm sorry for that incidents my grandma. In my college had semester examination in last month. Consequently we were ready to prepare for the exam. So the college warden was took mobiles from all students. Furthermore, I was fully concentrated in my examination portions. Now four exams are over, Moreover one more exam has on tomorrow. My college will gives holidays from day after tomorrow to one month. So my dearest grandma please come to my college tomorrow. Here I have many goods, Therfore I need your help. I'm very happy now. Because I will going to meet you after long days. I will get my phone tomorrow. Don't forget to call me at evening. I'm looking forward your visit the next day. Yours lovingly, John.

Dear grandma,

How are you? How is going on your life? I miss you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much grandma. What is the Possible spelling mistake found.climate
clymate
 in our The word “hometown” is normally spelled as one word.hometown
home town
 there? Here my studies are going well.

My hostel warden is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 strict. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Consequently,
Consequently
 my mobile phone would not in my hand mostly
 time. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I could not accept your phone calls. I'm sorry for that incidents my grandma.

In my college had semester examination in last month. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Consequently,
Consequently
 we were ready to prepare for the exam. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 the college warden was Consider using either the past participle “taken” or the present participle “taking” here.takentaking
took
 mobiles from all students. Furthermore
, I was fully
 concentrated in my examination portions. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 four exams are over, Moreover
 one more exam has on tomorrow.

My college will The modal verb ‘will’ requires the verb’s base form.give
gives
 holidays from day after tomorrow to one month. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 my dearest grandma This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to my college tomorrow. Here I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
, Possible spelling mistake found.Therefore
Therfore
 I need your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. I'm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 I will The modal verb ‘will’ requires the verb’s base form.gobe going
going
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you after long days. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 my phone tomorrow. Don't forget to call me at evening. I'm looking forward your visit the next
 day.

Yours lovingly
,

John. 