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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take mRL1
Hello Mr Khan, I am Anis Khan your neighbor in Apartment 105, I wanted to inform you that I had a sudden pipeline burst in my house, and it has caused a lot of Damage. However, I managed to stop the leakage myself on the contrary I had to get concealed water lines replaced with new lines. I want to apologize to you on the disturbance caused by this issue, I am sure it was a lot of sound coming out of my house during the last 2 days. It was an emergency that's why I could not inform you beforehand or else I would have informed you in advance. Thankfully most work has been completed where astinyfixesstill needs to be done. I will ensure to get it done during the day time, consequently it doesn't bother any ones sleep. Lastly I would like to thank you for you understanding and patience. Regards, Your Neighbor AA
Hello Mr Khan,

I am
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Anis
Khan your neighbor in Apartment 105, I wanted to inform you that I had a sudden pipeline burst in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, and it has caused
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
Damage.
However
, I managed to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
the leakage myself
on the contrary
I had to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
concealed water lines replaced with new lines.

I want to apologize to you on the disturbance caused by this issue, I am sure it was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
sound coming out of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
during the last 2 days. It was an emergency that's why I could not inform you beforehand or else I would have informed you in advance.
Thankfully
most work has
been completed
where
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astinyfixesstill
needs to
be done
. I will ensure to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it done during the day time,
consequently
it doesn't bother any ones sleep.

Lastly
I would like to thank you for you understanding and patience.

Regards,

Your Neighbor

AA

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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