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Write a letter to enter the competition advertised below. School trip competition Do you like going on school trip

Write a letter to enter the competition advertised below. School trip competition Do you like going on school trip AAwL

Dear Anna, It’s pleasure for me writing this letter, recently I had seen your advertisement for a school trips competition in your city. I was very fascinated for participating in this context Firstly, we all are excited about the school excursion, we can have a lot of fun time with our friends. With all of our discussions, we selected a place called green valley zoo, which was located in the south part of the UK. In the last year, we planned for going there but due to a pandemic, we didn’t visit that place. In that park, there are lot of rare species of wild animals, from different parts of the world. I was sure, it will be more entertaining for all of us. Well visiting this place, it will help the students for understanding the livelihood of animals and they can have the connection towards nature. I really appreciate you and your team, for encouraging the young students in these types of activities. I look forward to receiving your reply Yours Sincerely, Sandeep

Dear Anna,

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 your advertisement for a school trips competition in your city. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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 parts of the world. I was sure, it will be more entertaining for all of us. Well visiting this place, it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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 they can have the connection towards nature. I really
 appreciate you and your team, for encouraging the young students in these types of activities.

I look forward to receiving your reply

Yours Sincerely
,

Sandeep