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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course Dxw6
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in connection with your one year advance coding programme for elementary students. Let me explain in detail. My name is Johan and I am currently studying at the University of Burx. I recently came across an information published in ‘The HIndu’ newspaper that a full time Python coding course has recently been introduced by your college. I would like to inform you that I have always been interested in learning coding. The programme will not only be beneficial for my career but also helpful to enhance my knowledge. However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to submit the admission form on time as I am outside the city owing to the emergency situation. I visited here to meet my aunt last week because she is hospitalized. Therefore, I request you to extend the last date to submit the application considering my situation. In addition, It would be great if you could supply me more information about the course fee and timings. Thank you for consideration. Yours faithfully Johan Billy
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in connection with your
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "one-year"
one year
advance coding
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programme
for elementary students.

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Let
me
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explain
in detail. My name is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Johan and
I am
currently
studying at the University of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Burx
. I recently came across an information published in ‘The
Possible spelling mistake found.
HIndu
’ newspaper that a full time Python coding course has recently
been introduced
by your college. I would like to inform you that I have always
been interested
in learning coding. The
Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.
programme
will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
be beneficial for my career
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
helpful to enhance my knowledge.

However
, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to submit the admission form on time as I am outside the city owing to the emergency situation. I visited here to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
my aunt last week
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
she
is hospitalized
.

Therefore
, I request you to extend the last date to submit the application considering my situation.
In addition
, It would be great if you could supply me more information about the course fee and timings.

Thank you for consideration.

Yours
faithfully


Johan Billy

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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