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You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: • give details about the order you made • explain what was wrong with the item • tell the company what you want them to do about it Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: • give details about the order you made • explain what was wrong with the item • tell the company what you want them to do about it You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam n9Eg
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request a refund from your company for a black sequin dress I had purchased online last Friday. My order number 143, is a black sequin maxi dress which was placed last Friday via your official website. Since cash on delivery service was unavailable for this product, I had pre-paid for it through net banking. I received the package today morning and was disappointed to see a completely different product delivered. Instead of my original order, which is a black sequin dress, the product that has been delivered to me is a blue coloured jumpsuit with cut sleeves. I am not pleased with this. After contacting customer support, I was explained how the item has already been paid for hence, initiating a refund was not possible. Despite repeated clarifications, my complaint was not taken into account. This turn of events has caused me a lot of inconveniences and I would request you to collect the package and refund the money into my account at the earliest. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Aarunima.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request a refund from your
company
for a black sequin dress I had
purchased
online last Friday.

My order number 143, is a black sequin maxi dress which
was placed
last Friday via your official website. Since cash on delivery service was unavailable for this product, I had
pre-paid
for it through net banking.

I received the package
today morning
and
was disappointed
to
see
a completely
different
product delivered.
Instead
of my original order, which is a black sequin dress, the product that has
been delivered
to me is a
blue coloured
jumpsuit with
cut
sleeves. I am not
pleased
with this. After contacting customer support, I was
explained
how the item has already
been paid
for
hence
, initiating a refund was not possible. Despite repeated clarifications, my complaint was not taken into account.

This turn of
events
has caused me
a lot of
inconveniences and I would request you to collect the package and refund the money into my account at the earliest.

I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Aarunima
.
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IELTS letter You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: • give details about the order you made • explain what was wrong with the item • tell the company what you want them to do about it You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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