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2. You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbour Mr.Jackson moved in who has loud parties several times a week. You have spoken to Mr.Jackson but are not very close friends. Write a letter to Mr.Jackson. In your letter: • Explain the situation • Describe why it bothers you • Suggest a solution

2. You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbour Mr. Jackson moved in who has loud parties several times a week. You have spoken to Mr. Jackson but are not very close friends. Write a letter to Mr. Jackson. In your letter: • Explain the situation • Describe why it bothers you • Suggest a solution 0eEO
Dear Mr. Jackson, I am Prakash Eranki, resident of Building: 10, Flat: 4, and moreover your neighborhood. I am writing this letter with regard to the inconvenience that is caused due to late night gatherings. I have observed various times that you organize parties at your place and play songs at high volume till late night. I am staying here along with my ageing parents, both of whom are undergoing treatments and require bed rest. Since they are ailing, and more often than not need rest, but these parties is hindering their sleep which is not helping them to recover in time. Therefore, I request you to understand my situation and organize get-togethers during weekends only as we visit my sister’s house. In case, we fail to travel due to unavoidable circumstances, I will inform you well in advance. Thanking you in advance. Yours sincerely, Prakash Eranki
Dear Mr. Jackson,

I am Prakash
Eranki
, resident of Building: 10, Flat: 4, and
moreover
your neighborhood. I am writing this letter with regard to the inconvenience that
is caused
due to late night gatherings.

I
have observed various times that you organize parties at your place and play songs at high volume till late night.
I
am staying here along with my
ageing
parents, both of whom are undergoing treatments and require bed rest.

Since they are ailing, and more
often
than not need rest,
but
these parties is hindering their sleep which is not helping them to recover in time.

Therefore
, I request you to understand my situation and organize
get
-togethers during weekends
only
as we visit my sister’s
house
. In case, we fail to travel due to unavoidable circumstances, I will inform you well in advance.

Thanking you in advance.

Yours
sincerely
,

Prakash
Eranki
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IELTS letter 2. You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbour Mr. Jackson moved in who has loud parties several times a week. You have spoken to Mr. Jackson but are not very close friends. Write a letter to Mr. Jackson. In your letter: • Explain the situation • Describe why it bothers you • Suggest a solution

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  American English
8 paragraphs
146 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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