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You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar. Write a letter to your colleague who is the person in charge of the seminar and ask for: Detailed information regarding the dates Program schedule Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups

You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar. Write a letter to your colleague who is the person in charge of the seminar and ask for: Detailed information regarding the dates Program schedule Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups mR3r
Dear Mr. Alex, I am Ian Bell working as a System Manager in Testing Department. I am writing this letter with regard to the seminar where me and couple of my colleagues are interested to take part. Currently we are in a testing stage in a project and very shortly this will go live. As advised by the client, we might have to work overtime to complete the project within stipulated timelines. Therefore, I request you to share the itinerary, so that we can plan for this seminar accordingly. Moreover, I request you to share the agenda along with the detailed time frame. This will enable us to manage our time after office hours. Furthermore, it would be helpful if you could share the information regarding the fee of this session. As couple of my colleagues are also showing expression of interest thus I would like to know whether the cost is inclusive of transportation and food or not. We request you to offer us the concession as we will be joining in groups. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Ian Bell
Dear Mr. Alex,

I am Ian Bell working as a System Manager in Testing Department. I am writing this letter with regard to the seminar where me and
couple of
my colleagues
are interested
to
take part
.

Currently
we are in a testing stage in a project and
very
shortly this will go
live
. As advised by the client, we might
have to
work overtime to complete the project within stipulated timelines.
Therefore
, I request you to share the itinerary,
so
that we can plan for this seminar
accordingly
.

Moreover
, I request you to share the agenda along with the detailed time frame. This will enable us to manage our time after office hours.

Furthermore
, it would be helpful if you could share the information regarding the fee of this session. As
couple of
my colleagues are
also
showing expression of interest
thus
I would like to know whether the cost is inclusive of transportation and food or not. We request you to offer us the concession as we will be joining in groups.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Ian Bell
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IELTS letter You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar. Write a letter to your colleague who is the person in charge of the seminar and ask for: Detailed information regarding the dates Program schedule Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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