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1. In response to the news bulletin below, write a letter to the World Heritage Committee.

1. In response to the news bulletin below, write a letter to the World Heritage Committee. eYbx
Dear Sir or Madam, Today I learned that the magnificent Owl Forest has been approved as a New World Heritage site. I couldn’t be more jubilant. I’ve been fighting for years for this place to get the appreciation and attention it deserves. The Owl Forest is a marvelous gemstone in the wildlife of our region, and its significance in protecting the many species of owls in this region is essential. I also have personal connection to this place, since I’ve been hiking it with my father since the age of 4. One of my first memories is the sun shining through the foliage of the trees in the Owl Forest. I would like to thank you for your work, and express my support and gratitude. Sincerely, Xy
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Today
I learned that the magnificent
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Owl
Forest has
been approved
as a New World Heritage site. I couldn’t be more jubilant.

I’ve been fighting for years for this place to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the appreciation and attention it deserves. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Owl
Forest is a marvelous gemstone in the wildlife of our region, and its significance in protecting the
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many
species of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
owls
in this region is essential. I
also
have personal connection to this place, since I’ve been hiking it with my father since the age of 4. One of my
first
memories is the sun shining through the foliage of the trees in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Owl
Forest.

I would like to thank you for your work, and express my support and gratitude.

Sincerely
,

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IELTS letter 1. In response to the news bulletin below, write a letter to the World Heritage Committee.

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126 words
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