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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologies describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologies describe what action you will take mMjA
Dear neighbours, I am Iqbal, the new owner of the flat at 2nd floor of Peace Building. Recently I have received a complaint from you due to noise emerges from my flat. After buying the flat, I have noticed it needs some renovation work due to its age. Moisture comes out because some tiles have been broken down. Workers are working to fix these tiles. Some places, it needs new tiles. Ceiling needs a new paint thats why workers are cleaning the old paint. I really understand your problem due the noise. I am extremely sorry for your inconvenience. I am promising from the next day, workers will try to do minimum noise. They will work from 10 AM to 4 PM and the work will be done by next 3 days. Moreover, I have installed sound temporary sound proof sponge on my entrance door and windows to reduce the spread of the noise. I hope you will feel better from tomorrow. Best Regards, Iqbal
Dear
neighbours
,

I am Iqbal, the new owner of the flat at 2nd floor of Peace Building.

Recently I have received a complaint from you due to
noise
emerges from my flat. After buying the flat, I have noticed it needs
some
renovation work due to its age. Moisture
comes
out
because
some
tiles have
been broken
down. Workers are working to
fix
these tiles.
Some
places, it needs new tiles. Ceiling needs a new paint
thats
why workers are cleaning the
old
paint.

I
really
understand your problem due the
noise
. I am
extremely
sorry for your inconvenience.

I
am promising from the
next
day, workers will try to do minimum
noise
. They will work from 10 AM to 4 PM and the work will
be done
by
next
3 days.
Moreover
, I have installed sound temporary sound proof sponge on my entrance door and windows to
reduce
the spread of the
noise
. I hope you will feel better from tomorrow.

Best Regards,

Iqbal
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologies describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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