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Write a letter to the shop asking if they have a few different items that you are looking for. – Ask what the prices are and if they can be orders – Ask when they would arrive and if you can have them held in advance.

Write a letter to the shop asking if they have a few different items that you are looking for. – Ask what the prices are and if they can be orders – Ask when they would arrive and if you can have them held in advance. rWqN
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest in some specific beachwear products that perhaps I can find in your store, which is located in the same suburb where I live (GLEENROY, VIC). The products I am looking to order for my family and myself for our next holidays in the first week of July, will be 3 animal print women's bikini size s, 2 black kimonos size m and 2 pairs of sunglasses for girls of 5 years old. However, if those items are available, I would like to request a quate specifying prices and guarantee. Moreover, I would like to know the order process, including the shipping methods and conditions. In addition, if those items that I am requesting are in your store, I want to know how long it will take to reach to my home, or what may be the best option to obtain in advance, so we can get the option to check and try on these products before our event happen. I will be attentive to a positive response. Sincerely, Kate
Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my interest in
some
specific beachwear products that perhaps I can find in your store, which
is located
in the same suburb where I
live
(
GLEENROY
, VIC).

The products I am looking to order for my family and myself for our
next
holidays in the
first
week of July, will be 3 animal print women's bikini size s, 2 black kimonos size m and 2 pairs of sunglasses for girls of 5 years
old
.
However
, if those items are available, I would like to request a
quate
specifying prices and guarantee.
Moreover
, I would like to know the order process, including the shipping methods and conditions.

In addition
, if those items that I am requesting are in your store, I want to know how long it will take to reach to my home, or what may be the best option to obtain in advance,
so
we can
get
the option to
check
and try on these products
before
our
event
happen.

I will be attentive to a
positive
response.

Sincerely
,

Kate
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the shop asking if they have a few different items that you are looking for. – Ask what the prices are and if they can be orders – Ask when they would arrive and if you can have them held in advance.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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