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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter 1. thank them for the photos and for the holiday 2. explain why you didn’t write earlier 3. invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter 1. thank them for the photos and for the holiday 2. explain why you didn’t write earlier 3. invite them to come and stay with you WL9k

Dear Cindy I am writing this letter to thank you for having me stay with you during the holiday. I enjoyed the time we had to spend together. It was memorable. I must also thank you for the photos you sent of my holiday. The pictures are a great reminder of the trip. I will cherish them and look back at them when I miss you. It’s been a month since the holiday and I’ve been busy with school, work, and household chores I put off during my trip. As a result, I haven’t had a chance to take some time to write to you about the holiday. Now that my schedule has settled, I’d love for you to come visit. You can stay at my place, visit the nearby attractions and enjoy your holiday. I’m sure it’d be nice for us to spend some time together once more. I’ll be eagerly awaiting your holiday trip. I’m looking forward to receiving your reply. Best regards. Jonathan

Dear Cindy

I am writing this letter to thank you for having me stay with you during the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
. I enjoyed the time we had to spend together. It was memorable.

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must
also
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sent
 of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
. The pictures are a great reminder of the trip. I will cherish them and look back at them when I miss you.

It’s been a month since the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
 and I’ve been busy with school, work, and household chores I put off during my trip. As a result
, I haven’t had a chance to take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time to write to you about the holiday.

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Now
 that my schedule has settled, I’d This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 for you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 visit. You can stay at my place, visit the nearby attractions and enjoy your holiday.

I’m sure it’d be nice for us to spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time together once more. I’ll be eagerly
 awaiting your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
 trip. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m looking forward to receiving your reply.

Best regards.

Jonathan