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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbors.

Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. kdG8
Dear Sarah, Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter in response to your complaint about the noise coming from my house last night. First of all, I want to apologize for the inconvenience caused to you due to the noise. I can understand, it can be very discomforting and annoying to hear thud sounds coming from the next door, especially during the late night hours. With the recent snow storm and power outage, one of the kitchen water pipe was broken and the house was flooded with water. Due to the critical breakdown, we had to call the plumber right away and get the problem fixed. While doing so, in order to locate the leakage, the plumber had to drill from the outer wall of the house. That was the source of the hammering noises which lasted a couple of hours between 9: 00pm till 11: 00 pm. Luckily, the worker was able to fix the issue before it could cause any more damage to the house. I want to assure you that this won't happen again, and if any unavoidable situation arises, I will definitely inform you beforehand. Have a good rest of your day. Regards, Sushant Duggal
Dear Sarah,

Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter in response to your complaint about the noise coming from my
house
last night.

First of all
, I want to apologize for the inconvenience caused to you due to the noise. I can understand, it can be
very
discomforting and annoying to hear thud sounds coming from the
next
door,
especially
during the late night hours.

With the recent snow storm and power outage, one of the kitchen water pipe
was broken
and the
house
was flooded
with water. Due to the critical breakdown, we had to call the plumber right away and
get
the problem
fixed
. While doing
so
, in order to locate the leakage, the plumber had to drill from the outer wall of the
house
. That was the source of the hammering noises which lasted a couple of hours between 9: 00pm till 11: 00 pm. Luckily, the worker was able to
fix
the issue
before
it could cause any more damage to the
house
.

I want to assure you that this won't happen again, and if any unavoidable situation arises, I will definitely inform you beforehand.

Have a
good
rest of your day.

Regards,
Sushant
Duggal
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IELTS letter Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbors.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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