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Yesterday you lost your student identification card. You need it to get discounts on public transport and for the cinema, and to use the college library. Even more importantly, you need it as proof of identity to withdraw monthly at the bank. Write to the Director of Student Services explaining the situation and requesting a new card as soon as possible.

Yesterday you lost your student identification card. You need it to get discounts on public transport and for the cinema, and to use the college library. Even more importantly, you need it as proof of identity to withdraw monthly at the bank. Write to the Director of Student Services explaining the situation and requesting a new card as soon as possible. KARw
Dear Sir, I am writing to request a new student identification card. I have lost my card yesterday on my way back home from University. As you know the identification card is really important for the students. I used the same identity card at several points other than university library and entrance. In the coming week we have a test and I have planned with my friends to have group study in library and without card I would not be able to enter the library. Moreover, as this the start of the month and I have to pay my monthly rent and to withdraw money from the bank account I used my student card as proof of identity. Furthermore, my sister and I plan to watch a movie in cinema over the weekend and the student card helps us get the discount for movie. Kindly issue me a new student identity card as soon as possible, so that I would be able to continue my study and other activities easily. Yours sincerely, Asfia
Dear Sir,

I am writing to request a new
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student
identification
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card
. I have lost my
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card
yesterday on my way back home from University.

As you know the identification
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card
is
really
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important
for the
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students
. I
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used
the same identity
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card
at several points other than university library and entrance. In the coming week we have a
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test
and I have planned with my friends to have group study in library and without
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card
I would not be able to enter the library.

Moreover
, as this the
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start
of the month and I
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have to
pay my monthly rent and to withdraw money from the bank account I
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used
my
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student
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card
as proof of identity.
Furthermore
, my sister and I plan to
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watch
a movie in cinema over the weekend and the
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student
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card
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helps
us
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get
the discount for movie.

Kindly issue me a new
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student
identity
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card
as
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soon
as possible,
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so
that I would be able to continue my study and other activities
easily
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Asfia

IELTS letter Yesterday you lost your student identification card. You need it to get discounts on public transport and for the cinema, and to use the college library. Even more importantly, you need it as proof of identity to withdraw monthly at the bank. Write to the Director of Student Services explaining the situation and requesting a new card as soon as possible.

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