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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize describe what action you will take

Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize describe what action you will take 3l6Y
Dear Neighbours, My Name is Ritika and I have recently moved to house number 302 adjacent to your house. I got a complaint from you yesterday about the noise from our house. First, I would like to apologize you for the disturbance caused because of us. We bought new house and had a house warming party over the weekend. We had invited some of the close friends and relatives for this occasion. Some of our relatives were travelling from other states so they had to stay with us for a week. We had dance party and some rituals to follow, due to that reason music was loud. I am really very sorry for all this. Some of our guests had left yesterday and rest would be leaving today. I have informed everyone and will make sure that we do not cause any more disturbance to you in future. Hoping to meet you soon. Once again, please accept my apology. Regards, Ritika
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Neighbours
,

My Name is
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Ritika
and I have recently
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house
number 302 adjacent to your
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. I
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a complaint from you yesterday about the noise from our
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house
.
First
, I would like to apologize you for the disturbance caused
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because
of us. We
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bought
new
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house
and had a
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house warming
party over the weekend. We had invited
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some of the
close friends and relatives for this occasion.
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Some
of our relatives were travelling from other states
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so
they had to stay with us for a week. We had dance party and
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some
rituals to follow, due to that reason music was loud. I am
really
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sorry for all this.
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of our guests had
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yesterday and rest would be leaving
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today
. I have informed everyone and will
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make
sure that we do not cause any more disturbance to you
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in future
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meet
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soon
. Once again,
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please
accept my apology.

Regards,
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Ritika
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IELTS letter Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
160 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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