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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter 1. thank them for the photos and for the holiday 2. explain why you didn’t write earlier 3. invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter 1. thank them for the photos and for the holiday 2. explain why you didn’t write earlier 3. invite them to come and stay with you RAEG

Dear friends Thank you for the photos and thank you invited me for holiday. I enjoyed it very much and spent really fantastic time with you during the stay. Sorry I could not write email to you earlier. Because I was busy to set up my work and stele down due to move to a new apartment. All those things keep me busy and I thought to write a letter after all those thing are done. Now, everything is set and thank you for asking if I am doing well. Since Chinese new year is coming in two months. I would like to invite you come to my hometown. It will be another forgettable time for us. I will take you to the top viewed restaurants in the city and all the attractions. If you have more time, we can even visit the small, quite and beautiful villages outside of the city. That is what you always want to do. Looking forward your reply. Sincerely Zhuolun

Dear friends

Thank you for the photos and thank you invited me for holiday. I enjoyed it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much and spent really
 fantastic time with you during the stay.

Sorry I could not write email to you earlier. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 I was busy to set up my work and Possible spelling mistake found.stylesteelStevestoleSteelestale
stele
 down due to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to a new apartment. All those things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 me busy and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 to write a letter after all
Did you mean "this thing" or "those things"?this thingthose things
those thing
are done
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, everything is set
 and thank you for asking if I am doing well.

“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 Chinese new year is coming in two months. I would like to invite you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to my hometown. It will be another forgettable time for us. I will take you to the top viewed restaurants in the city and all the attractions. If you have more time, we can even visit the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
, quite and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 villages This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside".outside
outside of
 the city. That is
 what you always want to do.

Looking forward your reply.

Sincerely


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Zhuolun