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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter 1. thank them for the photos and for the holiday 2. explain why you didn’t write earlier 3. invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter 1. thank them for the photos and for the holiday 2. explain why you didn’t write earlier 3. invite them to come and stay with you RAEG
Dear friends Thank you for the photos and thank you invited me for holiday. I enjoyed it very much and spent really fantastic time with you during the stay. Sorry I could not write email to you earlier. Because I was busy to set up my work and stele down due to move to a new apartment. All those things keep me busy and I thought to write a letter after all those thing are done. Now, everything is set and thank you for asking if I am doing well. Since Chinese new year is coming in two months. I would like to invite you come to my hometown. It will be another forgettable time for us. I will take you to the top viewed restaurants in the city and all the attractions. If you have more time, we can even visit the small, quite and beautiful villages outside of the city. That is what you always want to do. Looking forward your reply. Sincerely Zhuolun
Dear friends

Thank you for the photos and thank you invited me for holiday. I enjoyed it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much and spent
really
fantastic time with you during the stay.

Sorry I could not write email to you earlier.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
I was busy to set up my work and
Possible spelling mistake found.
stele
down due to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to a new apartment. All those things
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
me busy and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
to write a letter
after all
Did you mean "this thing" or "those things"?
those thing
are done
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, everything
is set
and thank you for asking if I am doing well.

“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
Chinese new year is coming in two months. I would like to invite you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my hometown. It will be another forgettable time for us. I will take you to the top viewed restaurants in the city and all the attractions. If you have more time, we can even visit the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
, quite and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
villages
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside".
outside of
the city.
That is
what you always want to do.

Looking forward your reply.

Sincerely


Possible spelling mistake found.
Zhuolun

IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter 1. thank them for the photos and for the holiday 2. explain why you didn’t write earlier 3. invite them to come and stay with you

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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