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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take m1b91
Dear John I am writing this letter in connection to your letter i recieved yesterday about your complain on the loud noise you here from my flat. Let me explain you the situation, as you know i am in the final year of uiniversity and will graduate in 2 weeks. Our junior batch are organizing a farewell party for us in which the have requested a perfrmance from the seniors. So we are doing rehersals for our performance for which i already took permission from all our neighbours except you as you were out of townon vacations. I am very sorry for thr noise we made these few days and you suffered because of us but i didnt knew your are back from vacations, i would have visited you and asked your permission aswel. As you mentioned your mother is with you now a days and she is not feeling well and our noise irritate her so please say sorry to her on my behalf. I have shifted all out rehersal to one of friend's home outside the town so you could not suffer anymore because of me Please feel free to write a letter or visit me personally if you have any problem from my side or you need any help with any thing Your Sincerely Waleed Ghufran
Dear John

I am writing this letter in connection to your letter i
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recieved
yesterday about your
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complain
on the loud noise you here from my flat.

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Let
me
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explain
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you
the situation, as you know
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i
am in the final year of
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uiniversity
and will graduate in 2 weeks. Our junior batch are organizing a farewell party for us in which the have requested a
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perfrmance
from the seniors.
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So
we are doing
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rehersals
for our performance for which
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i
already took permission from all our
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neighbours
except you as you were out of
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townon
vacations.

I am
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very
sorry for
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thr
noise we made these few days and you suffered
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because
of us
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but
i
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didnt
knew your are back from vacations,
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i
would have visited you and asked your permission
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aswel
.

As you mentioned your mother is with you
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now a days
and she is not feeling well and our noise irritate her
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so
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please
say sorry to her on my behalf. I have shifted all out
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rehersal
to one of friend's home outside the town
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so
you could not suffer
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anymore
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because
of
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me


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Please
feel free to write a letter or visit me
personally
if you have any problem from my side or you need any
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help
with
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any thing


Your
Sincerely


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Waleed
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Ghufran
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
218 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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