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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take m0eL
Dear John, I hope you and your family are well! I am writing this letter to you with an apology for the inconvenience noise by our house. Firstly, I am going to tell you the reason behind this disturbance. Actually, yesterday night our sink pipe was leaking unfortunately and we all family member hyper on this situation and doing fastly everything to manage the house equipment and, I called to the plumber for this problem. I know about that, I speak loudly on a phone but we never did this intentionally. I heartily feel sorry for the noises which we made yesterday night. I using voice controller sheets on my wall maybe with the help of these you will have listened to no noise from our house. I feel really bad. I hope you understand. I am waiting for your positive response after reading this letter. your faithfully, Amandeep kaur
Dear John,

I hope you and your family are well! I am writing this letter to you with an apology for the inconvenience noise by our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Firstly
, I am going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you the reason behind this disturbance. Actually,
This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "last night" is used.
yesterday night
our sink pipe was leaking
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
unfortunately and
we all family member hyper on this situation and doing
Possible spelling mistake found.
fastly
everything to manage the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
equipment and, I called to the plumber for this problem. I know about that, I speak
loudly
on a phone
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
we never did this
intentionally
.

I
heartily
feel sorry for the noises which we made
This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "last night" is used.
yesterday night
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
using voice controller sheets on my wall maybe with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of these you will have listened to no noise from our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
feel
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you understand.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am waiting for your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response after reading this letter.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
your
faithfully
,

Amandeep
Possible spelling mistake found.
kaur

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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