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You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the land lord. In your letter, explain why you are writing, ask for the return of your deposit, inform the land lord of possible legal action

You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the land lord. In your letter, explain why you are writing, ask for the return of your deposit, inform the land lord of possible legal action lo3w
Dear Mr Smith I am writing for request you to repay my deposit that I payed to you, before I rented your appartment as agreement we both signed. I kept the appartment in original condition as it was handed over to me and I didnt change any thing except few light bulbs that I replaced for not working ones in m own expences. I want you to return the money to me immediatly, because you asked the deposit to cover any damages happened during the time I was staying and nothing done by me to repair or fix. I also payed the rent at the end of every month so you do not need to hold the sum for such time period until I request you over and over. If you do not pay the deposit as you promised, I will place inquiry to the police station with the documents you signed on terms and coditions about the renting the appartment. I hope you will understand this situation and take prompt action to solve the crisis. I look forward to hearing from you Your sincerely Hasith Seniya Tennakoon
Dear Mr Smith

I am writing for request you to repay my deposit that I
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payed
to you,
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before
I rented your
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appartment
as agreement we both signed. I
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kept
the
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appartment
in original condition as it
was handed
over to me and I
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didnt
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change
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any thing
except few light bulbs that I replaced for not working ones in m
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own
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expences
.

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I
want you to return the money to me
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immediatly
,
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because
you asked the deposit to cover any damages happened during the time I was staying and nothing done by me to repair or
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fix
.
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I
also
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payed
the rent at the
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end
of every month
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so
you do not need to hold the sum for such time period until I request you over and over.

If you do not pay the deposit as you promised, I will place inquiry to the police station with the documents you signed on terms and
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coditions
about the renting the
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appartment
. I hope you will understand this situation and take prompt action to solve the crisis.

I look forward to hearing from you

Your
sincerely


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Hasith
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Seniya
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Tennakoon
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IELTS letter You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the land lord. In your letter, explain why you are writing, ask for the return of your deposit, inform the land lord of possible legal action

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  American English
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187 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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