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Dear SirI am Namitha Ren pursuing regular PhD in Microbial Biotechnology from Department of Life Science at University of Delhi. i am a gold medalist and was awarded first rank for my Post Graduate and Graduate studies in Microbiology from the same university. Currently, i am burdened with financial constraints which has forced me to shift to a part time PhD so that i can have ample time to work and support myself. My previous experiences has made me extremely good at both theoretical and practical aspects of biotechnology. I believe i could be a good candidate as a Research Assistant which would give me an opportunity to contribute by showcasing my academic and research skills. i am also good at basic computer skills and extremely good at biostatistics especially in using of R- software and SPSS. In addition to this i believe i am a good team leader with good communication skills. I request you to consider my candidature for the role of a research assistant at your organization. I shall be eagerly looking forward to know your feedback once my profile is received. Yours SincerelyNamitha Ren
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pursuing regular PhD in Microbial Biotechnology from Department of Life Science at University of Delhi.
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i
am a gold medalist and
was awarded
first
rank for my Post Graduate and Graduate studies in Microbiology from the same university.

Currently
,
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i
am burdened
with financial constraints which has forced me to shift to a
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part time
PhD
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so
that
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can have ample time to work and support myself. My previous experiences
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has
made me
extremely
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good
at both theoretical and practical aspects of biotechnology. I believe
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i
could be a
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good
candidate as a Research Assistant which would give me an opportunity to contribute by showcasing my academic and research
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skills
.
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am
also
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good
at basic computer
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skills
and
extremely
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good
at biostatistics
especially
in using of R- software and
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SPSS
.
In addition
to this
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believe
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i
am a
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good
team leader with
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good
communication
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skills
.

I request you to consider my candidature for the role of a research assistant at your organization. I shall be
eagerly
looking forward
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to know
your feedback once my profile
is received
. Yours
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SincerelyNamitha
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IELTS letter looking for a part time job. write a letter to an employment agency

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5.0
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