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You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party 6gR3

Dear John, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and good spirits. I am writing to have a favour from you regarding cake making. You would be very happy to know that i got promoted as an Assistant manager in the sales department of my company. In that context, I am throwing a party at my place on the coming Monday. Some of my colleagues and friends would join me in the party. The chief guest of the day would be the boss of my company. Therefore, I want to make some special for him. Last month, when me and my family visited your house, you made a yummy chocolate cake for us. Even now, I could not get over the taste of that finger licking cake. I think that would be appropriate for the occasion and definitely in my budget. Could you please share the recipe of that cake with me? I know you have unmatched bakery skills. Still, I want to give a try and make a perfect cake by strictly following your instructions. Do mail me the recipe earlier so that I can practice it for efficiency. Besides, I would like you to present with me on that day. Bring your younger brother also. We would have great fun together. See you soon! Yours lovingly, Michael.

Dear John, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 spirits. I am writing to have a Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 from you regarding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cake
 making. You would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy to know that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 promoted as an Assistant manager in the sales department of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. In that context, I am throwing a party at my place on the coming Monday. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of my colleagues and friends would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 me in the party. The chief guest of the day would be the boss of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Therefore
, I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 special for him.

Last month, when me and my family visited your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, you made a yummy chocolate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cake
 for us. Even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, I could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 over the taste of that finger licking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cake
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that would be appropriate for the occasion and definitely in my budget. Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 share the recipe of that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cake
 with me?

I know you have unmatched bakery This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. Still
, I want to give a "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.try to
try and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a perfect You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cake
 by strictly
 following your instructions. Do mail me the recipe earlier This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can practice it for efficiency. Besides
, I would like you to present with me on that day. Bring your younger brother also
. We would have great fun together. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
!

Yours lovingly
, Michael. 